成龙大哥你看我这样跟中介说是不是可以, 不过不好意思，我的英语不太好，应该写得有很多错误.能不能请你看看有什么地方需要修改和增加的吗。
I am unhappy with the dedution for the deposit, the reasons as following
1: For the smoked in house
My husband no smoking. My friends smoked in the garden when they visit us. They never smoked in the house. You can see the ashtray was putted on the garden’s bench.
2: The house haven’t adequate ventilation.
I opened the windows every day which included downs stair and upstairs’ windows. Also I bought dehumidifier. I turn on dehumidifier at least 4 hours every day during the winter. I turn on the dehumidifier as well when the weather was baddly such as rainnny, cold or snowing. Only in summer we didn’t use this machine frequently。这里需不需要我曾经咨询过中介的意见和房东的意见呢，房东的意见是要整天开窗，就是说窗子至少要留一条缝。中介的意见是英国百分之八十的房子都长。
3。For the wall paper cracked.
This is not my responsibility。 I have not peel off the wall paper. The wall paper cracked due to its own reason. Perhaps the wallpaper has been to the age of the change。 Even some wall papaer cracked on the high place.
4。For the mould around window and blinds.
I paid the professional tenancy clean already. Please contact cleaning company to redo the clean if the landlord think the window and blind not clean enough.
5. For the tap closed the windows.
I have been contact landlord to ask the key of the windows around two years ago. I cannot remember the actually time. I try all the windows key which landlord left in the house. However, all the keys cannot lock the upstairs’ window. These key only can used for few window’s of downstair.
The reason for why I have tap closed the wiondow due to my two children climb the windows. One day, they both stood on the wiondowsill. It will very dangous for may they will drop from the window. I asked key to lock the window, however, landlord cannot give me the correct key. I have to protect my children. I didn’t fully tap close the windows. Adult can open the tapped window but children cannot do it.
There were some tap mark or some tap lefted on the window or the wall near the window. I think the cleaning company has the responsibility to clean the tap mark or tap which still on the windowsill.
6. For the replacement of the curtain rail on one bedroom
The original curtain rail was the tiny plastic rail which always dropped on the floor and easy to hit my children. I used rope instand of the rail because its more stable. Also the rail is aged
I only can agree landlord replace the same rail. Please give me the proof show landlord replace the same curtain rail with receipt.
7. For the replacement of shovel.
I didn’t see the shovel miss in the check out report. Landlord left many tool which in his shed. I nevel touched it. Please show me the proof and recepit for the shovel. I only agree pay for the same shovel. I think landlord can find all his tools in his shed.
8. In the check in report, it shows the property has been cleaned to a domestic standard.
I paid the for the Professional end of tenancy clean.
This is the different level to clean. I need claim back the different price between the domestic standard and professional end of tenancy clean.